Cos it's the weekend...let us all have some fun :D

Final Fantasy VII/VIII
One sentence~Drabble~Snippet~Fic meme

wanna play?
  • Post a pairing and a prompt (any kind)
  • Someone/anyone fills out the prompt (any length)
  • Good times for all!
  • Anon or non-anon - the choice is yours <3
  • Spam is encouraged
  • Polyamory is also encouraged >.>
  • Stick figure crack pics are encouraged...hell art fills are definitely encouraged
  • Crossovers between VII & VIII are welcome
  • Enjoy!
Why yes, I couldn't choose between the two so I chose them both >.>

From: [identity profile] gardensgnome.livejournal.com

Re: Part two of ...whatever?


This is post game? I'm trying to visualize it. Which I have no idea if that makes sense seeing as it's fanfic XD Are we supposed to visualize fanfic? *grin*

Poor mashed-up Seifer although he'll probably hiss and grumble for being pitied. He should be glad Squall is the one to find him because he's the best capable to deal with Seifer, not necessarily needing words to communicate and all unlike the others.

Seifer needs to save Squall from Rinoa's sorceress wiles. Everyone should write fic about that.

From: [identity profile] gargoule.livejournal.com

Re: Part two of ...whatever?


It comes across as very post game. i can see rinoa having another bout of unconsciousness after a battle with seifer - who wanted to come and make amends or something. the sorceress power in her reacting to seifer in a bad way and her unable to control it.

that's how it's coming across to me. I did feel like i cut it off a bit, or rushed it now that i give it yet another rereading. huh. why is it when you post something, it reads good but later, you notice all the flaws?

From: [identity profile] gardensgnome.livejournal.com

Re: Part two of ...whatever?


I think we notice flaws and such after posting because we've taken a step or three away from what's been written. Being immersed in a fic can make it hard to see what isn't quite right until you manage to put it down for a while. Then you have to resist the urge to re-write whole chunks.

I'm liking that thought you're having of it being post game and Rinoa lashing out at Seifer without really meaning to but the power in her seeing him as a threat or something. Could make an interesting add-in to a long fic somewhere along the line. You'll have to keep it for future reference.

From: [identity profile] gargoule.livejournal.com

Re: Part two of ...whatever?


That is probably part of it. That and I know I wanted to really get it posted. Felt all sort of excited to post something longer than a couple hundred words.

I'm trying to remember who got whose power. Didn't it all go to Rinoa? Because Edea gave her powers up to Rinoa when Ulti took over. I'm assuming Adel's were given to Rinoa - I can see not happily about that as well. But then, that whole time loop shit starts and Ulti sends herself back to Edea.

I think I might keep and use it for part of the never ending UM. >.> I swear I will finish that.
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